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Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?

#countries #cities #people #world #government
In today’s multinational
world
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 it is very common for big cities to have a lot of immigrants from various countries.
Although
 we are now adapted to
such
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 in our society, it is still a huge problem for our government, which makes them think about a variety of ways to guarantee
harmoniously
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 life. There are a number of possible ways to support peaceful interaction between different people. In the first place,
government
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 should make it clear
for
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 other nationalities, that its country is hospitable
for
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 each people, regardless of
its
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 origin. Developing
this
 idea, the government should offer free language and culture lessons for those, who came as immigrants.
Secondly
, it is necessary to organize multinational events.
For example
, there is a summer tradition in our country, to arrange
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 Food Festival” where people can try different cuisines and,
moreover
, found new information about
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 nationality.
In addition
, local authorities can
also
 add
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education
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 system
such
 subjects as culture and sociology, where students can be taught about everything in certain
nation
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. That might cause friendly relations between nations. At the same time, all governments should ensure that schools
also
 teach history not only about
home
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 nation. Plus, it is necessary for immigrants to widen their knowledge about the culture of the place, they decided to live in. In conclusion, understanding other cultures is the key
of
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 harmony in the world.
However
, it is important to clarify, that not only governments should take action in building friendly relationships, but
also
 inhabitants.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cosmopolitan
  • inclusive policies
  • cultural exchange
  • integration
  • community centers
  • anti-discrimination
  • awareness campaigns
  • support systems
  • diversity
  • equal opportunities
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