The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
This
chart looks at the quantity
of magazines per individual in five different countries in 2003 and 2005. Change the quantifier
number
In
addition
the prognosis has been made for 2007.
The provided chart illustrates that the sales leader in 2003 was B and with a small difference goes A. C has around 45 magazines sold, Add a comma
,addition
while
in
D was sold half as many. The smallest one is E, which number is about 5. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, this
picture duplicates in
2005 and 2007 for each country.
The given illustration provides the information that the biggest consumption of paper production has country B. Change preposition
apply
In contrast
, the lowest level has E. In other words
, they have around 150 and 15 magazines per person respectively, so the difference is by ten times.
To summarize, the increasing trend can be seen for D, whereas
A, B, and C reveal a downward. At the same time, E has a peak in 2005, while
sold papers in 2003 and 2007 are roughly the same.Submitted by li_istomina on
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