some people believe that nowadays we have too much choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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In modern days, we have more opportunities to select
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choices
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compared to prior centuries.
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, in my opinion,
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agree that possessing too many selections outweighs drawbacks,
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others think that it doesn't play a significant role in some ways. On the one hand, in recent days people highlight
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technology development
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as electronic devices, artificial intelligence, scientific success and various websites.
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, we are facing various
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in our everyday lives.
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, few students used to study abroad
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the fact that their prior experience and academic knowledge but now students are able to study at international universities wherever they want
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of globalization and the internet era.
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,
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a cut-throat competition
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based on
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leads to
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more
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imaginative and wiser arts and artists. So we have
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to choose a particular genre we want to acquire.
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, in some fields
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as medicine, there are still incurable diseases that become troublesome problems in humankind. Even though
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we have too many options in technology, business industry and art etc, there are remaining things that we need to invent.
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, there isn't an appropriate option for blood cancer and many patients are struggling to overcome
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disease. The available treatment's function is relapsing the acute phase and reserving remission time.
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,
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we have plenty of
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in previously mentioned fields it is inevitable
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still expanding its quantities and qualities depending on our interests and wishes. But we have to remember that there are still undeveloped and limited fields
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worldwide.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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