The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The following pair of maps illustrate how
road
networks leading to a city hospital changed over 3 years.
Overall
, there had been some noticeable changes done in this
area regarding expanding roads, building new facilities or replacing some with new ones.
In 2007, there was a car park between the right side of Ring Road
and City Road
which was built for both the public and staff, while
it was only allowed for staff to park there in 2010, and the public was excluded. Meanwhile, a new parking lot for other people with a new entry was added to the right side of Ring Road
.
Furthermore
, in 2007 there was a bus station on the two sides of Hospital Road
, Yet, in 2010, a new bus station with 2 entries was constructed on the left side of Hospital Road
. In addition
, in 2007, there were two junctions, the upside and downside of Hospital Road
, however
, they were replaced with two new roundabouts.Submitted by mohammadmgh1381 on
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