Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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and gain a significant
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children
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while
the
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of time.
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some countries, there
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learning
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the morning and
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education
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him more knowledge and skills.
however
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children
smarter. It is
also
possible to say that several people encouraged families to collaborate with tutors to enhance the
education
of their
children
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of
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many subjects.
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Japan, the
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countries. If they do not want the
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question. On balance,
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children
to more studying.
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,
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homework
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benefits. So, for us to develop
children
to learning.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
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  • education system
  • cultural diversity
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