Most writers of fiction do not earn enough money from their writing. Do you think the government should give them financial assistance to help encourage good literature?

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and knowledge.
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some people believe that government should not support the
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writers
financially, I believe that they deserve to be supported. In
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. Writing is the academic
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unit. To illustrate, stories and novels
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many essential ideas.
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society
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culture and their innovations, these
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to the future generation unless we save it in
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libraries
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Furthermore
, excellent
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writers
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