The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The graph depicts the four various kinds of
tranport
(train, Correct your spelling
transport
car
, tube and bus
) used to travel and
from work in Change preposition
to and
an
European city during three different years.
Change the article
a
Overall
. the using of car
had significantly increased, Fix the agreement mistake
cars
while
the amount of bus
users
had decreased during these 40 years.
At the outset, in 1960almost 40% of commuters had
preferred mostly a Unnecessary verb
apply
bus
; however
, just 7% of people used to travel by car
. By contrast
, in 2000 the roles of modes had changed their place, as the percentage of car
users
peaked its hit (about 37%), and the number of bus
users
had
diminished Unnecessary verb
apply
approximately
2.5 times.
Change preposition
by approximately
Furthermore
, the amount
of passengers who used a train and a tube as Change the quantifier
number
an
Change the article
a
trasportation
Correct your spelling
transportation
item
Fix the agreement mistake
items
,
had seen stable changes. The percentages of commuters who took a trip or went to work Remove the comma
apply
with
train did not Change preposition
by
went
up more than 28%, Change the verb form
go
as well as
, the number of tube users
changed just
22% and 25%, respectively.Change preposition
by just
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