Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter • give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre • explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community • describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inquire about the event that the sports centre would be closed next year. To be honest, I was shocked yesterday when I heard it from my neighbour. As I know, including my family member, my friends Joyce and Joson and I used to visit

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, many neighbours are often able to do exercise

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its facilitated equipment. In our community, there is no other facility to replace

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one. Because it covered all of the equipment

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as the running machine, swimming pool, and tennis court. Especially in winter, we cannot find any swimming pools surrounding our neighbourhood. We enjoy it for our exercise regularly despite we were less likely to go every week. I understand it will cost a lot to maintain its basic running. But

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is a connection site for our community. I cannot imagine if we lose it. I highly suggest that you and your team can reconsider

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because it is absolutely valuable for our daily life. We are grateful to join your considerate discussion. I am looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Tina.

guojingchang0426Mon Jul 31 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

203 words

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leisure centre
foster social bonds
physical health
mental well-being
constructive activities
accessible
exercise
community spirit
public service
anti-social behavior
cost-saving measures
vital role
recreation
negative impact
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