Everyone need to study until the age of 18? Discuss and give your opinion?

Nowadays,many people think everyone should study until they reach the age of 18. I agree with

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because studying takes a huge part in our lives and can't be neglected.

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there is no reason why one shouldn't study, especially in their younger years. One of the benefits of learning as a minor in education at that age is mostly free in all countries, unlike older people who would have to pay a large amount of money to get into a good school.

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not going to school can be frowned upon for most people, and will result in having a much more difficult time getting a job.

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, when applying for a job most companies would question why he or she has a gap in their resume for schools and colleges graduated from. leading many companies to hire someone else. Some might argue that having a good plan that makes enough money is a reason to quit.

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has some truth in it we need to consider the long run, For many of these plans don't look far ahead in the future.

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, many teens would stop studying to be full-time streamers on apps

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as Twitch or Youtube making a good profit ,Unfortuneatlly most end up bankrupt for their games or popularity was only a trend. In conclusion, there is no reason why a minor should stop or quit learning.Even if he or she found a way to make money, they should consider the future ,and in the

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they could simply do both.