The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows the change in the
stock
price
from 2011 to 2016 of four technology companies Facebook, Google,
Apple
and Yahoo.
Overall
, the data reveals a significant increase in the
stock
price
of
Apple
and a sharp decrease. Facebook remained increased
stable
Change the adjective
stably
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.
In contrast
, Yahoo remained decreased. Meanwhile, Google figures remain constant. A deep analysis of the graph provided reveals the
stock
price
of
Apple
increased dramatically from 5,000 in 2011 to about 35,000 in 2012;
however
, the
stock
price
of
Apple
decreased sharply down under 10,000 in 2013 and continued to decrease in the next years. Meanwhile, the
stock
price
of Google's figures remained constant at 0 from 2011 to 2016. From an
overall
perspective,
it is clear that
the
stock
price
of Facebook remained increase stable from about 7,500 in 2011 to 20,000 in 2016. At the same time, Yahoo remained decrease from about 7,500 in 2011 to about 2,000 in 2016.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words stock, price, apple with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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