The maps underneath describes the changes that have taken place in and around Queen Mary Hospital since its building in 1960 till 2000
The display maps describe the changes place in
the
around queen mary hospital from 1960 to 2000. Correct article usage
apply
This
below information gives Correct determiner usage
The
an explanations
about 3 maps, 1960,1980 and 2000.
Correct the article-noun agreement
an explanation
explanations
Firstly
, in the
1960, there was Change the article
apply
shopping
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a shopping
centre
, hospital, farmland and car park. Then
in 1980, there was a cancer centre
, nursing school, parking for bike
, Fix the agreement mistake
bikes
pharamcy
and Correct your spelling
pharmacy
also
Correct article usage
a hosiptal
hosiptal
. Correct your spelling
hospital
After
this
in 2000, there is a pharmacy, cancer centre
, nursing institution, hospital as well as
car parking. From 1960 to 2000 main
road remain as it is. In 1960 there was farming place. Correct article usage
the main
However
, By 1980, cancer centre
and Fix the agreement mistake
centres
nurse
Replace the word
nursing
insitution
Correct your spelling
institutions
is add
. From 1960 to 2000 lots Change the verb form
is added
is adding
development
took place. The Hospital large Change preposition
of development
remain
as it is. The size Change the verb form
remains
for
Change preposition
of
main
road is as equal Change the article
the main
as
Change preposition
to
before
and after.
In conclusion, the above information describes Correct article usage
the before
about
the given 3 maps, from Remove the preposition
apply
since
1960 to 2000. There is a Change preposition
apply
lot
growth between 1960 to 2000.Add the preposition
oflot
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