Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many people have various opportunities to live and work in foreign countries.
However
, living in
a
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different countries may
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a
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foreign
language
skills.
Thus
,
this
may cause a number of difficulties to live in. I agree with
this
statement for the following reasons.
Firstly
, people who living abroad
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need to use a different
language
have some difficulties in communication skills.
According to
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immigrants suffer from
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in because of
language
. Every
countries
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have a variety of cultures.
However
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if they can’t communicate, they are struggling to fit in their community.
Furthermore
,
this
may feel loneliness
along with
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friends and
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social
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. it leads to depression and maladjustment.
In addition
, there are a couple of practical problems. One of the most
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is getting
job
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a job
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in
foreign
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country.
As a result
,to be hired
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local
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company
,
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be required high-level of
local
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language
.
For instance
, if they
were
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misunderstand their work,
it
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might
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some financial problems.
As a result
, if they are not employed , it would be hard to
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maintain a livelihood. In conclusion,
lack
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of
language
skills will cause some difficulties
such
as not only socializing but
also
practical issues to live
in
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abroad. For one thing, miscommunication with local dwells is hard to settle in. For another, working as
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employee
in
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abroad is required
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of English to absorb their work.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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