You have seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach English overseas. Write to the recruitment office. In your letter •Tell them where you saw the advertisement •Explain why you would like to go •Describe the skills that you have that you think would help

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Dear Sr/Madam, I’ve just seen an advertisement looking for volunteers to teach

English

overseas. It’s amazing. Yesterday I search to find some information about education, skills in life, travel…and I see

this

advertisement. I’m so happy when I see that,

as a result

as I am looking for something to challenge myself. I’m just graduated from the University, and my major is

English

. I want to have a gap year to travel, improve my

English

skills, relax, and help some people unlucky. When I study at the University, I join some classes to study

English

for poor children. In

this

class, I help them learn about grammar, vocabulary and speaking.

Besides

that, I joined a group

English

, and we acted at the weekend, at Le Van Tam Park in Ho Chi Minh City. Here, we help to improve our speaking skills together, sometimes in the group have foreigners. They will teach me to speak more confidently. Yours faithfully Mercy Nguyen

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

160 words

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