The diagram below shows how cheese is made.

The diagram below shows how cheese is made.
The diagram demonstrates the different steps that are involved in producing
cheese
.
Overall
, there are 9 steps involved in
this
process starting with raw
milk
and culminating with bringing the shop
To begin
with, there are two approaches first step. In the first approach, raw
milk
is separated to protect it from bacteria.
Secondly
, Raw
milk
is made into curd which is formed in a container and
then
the
milk
is made into curds through continuous cutting . Afterwards, the
milk
is stirred and it is drained out from the container. After completing , the salt is added to the curd and
then
the curd is shaped and the
cheese
is fermented for two months . After, the
cheese
on the conveyor belt is poured into the moulds and pressed to spread the
cheese
evenly and the additional they are drained off.
In addition
to that ,
cheese
is packaged to sell .
Finally
, the prepared
cheese
is brought to the shop
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pasteurization
  • Coagulation
  • Curd
  • Whey
  • Rennet
  • Cheddaring
  • Affinage (aging)
  • Brine
  • Cultures
  • Enzymes
  • Homogenization
  • Lactic acid bacteria
  • Mold ripening
  • Pressing
  • Ripening
  • Salt
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