The diagram below shows how cheese is made.
The diagram demonstrates the different steps that are involved in producing
cheese
.
Overall
, there are 9 steps involved in this
process starting with raw milk
and culminating with bringing the shop
To begin
with, there are two approaches first step. In the first approach, raw milk
is separated to protect it from bacteria. Secondly
, Raw milk
is made into curd which is formed in a container and then
the milk
is made into curds through continuous cutting .
Afterwards, the milk
is stirred and it is drained out from the container. After completing , the salt is added to the curd and then
the curd is shaped and the cheese
is fermented for two months . After, the cheese
on the conveyor belt is poured into the moulds and pressed to spread the cheese
evenly and the additional they are drained off. In addition
to that , cheese
is packaged to sell . Finally
, the prepared cheese
is brought to the shopSubmitted by chartakinnovation on
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