The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the survey results of four reasons
that
why Correct word choice
apply
people
move to another country in 2000, 2005, 2010, and 2015.
Overall
, the graph shows that the significant reason
of
why Change preposition
apply
people
move is for employment and the least reason
why they travel is for adventure.
As can be seen in the line chart, that
in 2000, 60000 Correct word choice
apply
people
travelled for employment and until
2010 the Change preposition
by
number
increased to 92000. However
, at
2015 the Change preposition
in
number
decreased to became 85000. There was a huge increasing
why Replace the word
increase
people
moved for the reason
of studying, as seen in the chart in 2000 there was
only 25000 moved to study Correct subject-verb agreement
were
then
until 2015 the number
increased to reach almost 90000.
Moving to family/friends and adventure. From 2000 to 2005 it was only 10000 then
in 2015 the number
increases to be
20000. Unnecessary verb
apply
In addition
, the least reason
for travelling was studying, in 2000 was only 10000 by reaching to 2015 with a little increasing it reached to 15000.Submitted by adelsot2005 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, reason, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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