The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the survey results of four reasons
that
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why
people
move to another country in 2000, 2005, 2010, and 2015.
Overall
, the graph shows that the significant
reason
of
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why
people
move is for employment and the least
reason
why they travel is for adventure. As can be seen in the line chart,
that
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in 2000, 60000
people
travelled for employment and
until
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by
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2010 the
number
increased to 92000.
However
,
at
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in
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2015 the
number
decreased to became 85000. There was a huge
increasing
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increase
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why
people
moved for the
reason
of studying, as seen in the chart in 2000 there
was
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were
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only 25000 moved to study
then
until 2015 the
number
increased to reach almost 90000. Moving to family/friends and adventure. From 2000 to 2005 it was only 10000
then
in 2015 the
number
increases to
be
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20000.
In addition
, the least
reason
for travelling was studying, in 2000 was only 10000 by reaching to 2015 with a little increasing it reached to 15000.
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