Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after graduating from high school. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

There is a debate regarding the most effective path to a successful career. Some

individuals

argue that

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higher

education

at a university or college is the optimal route,

while

others contend that entering the workforce immediately after completing secondary

education

is more advantageous.

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of view and explain my opinion. Proponents of higher

education

assert that attending a university or college provides

individuals

with the necessary

knowlege

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knowledge

, skills and credentials to excel in their chosen field. They maintain that a degree from a reputable institution can open doors to more prestigious and higher-paying job opportunities.

Moreover

, some

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job

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need

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a high

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high level

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education

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or skills and

experience

,

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depends

on the position being applied for. Take

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example, law, medicine and teaching, it is

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impossible

to

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for

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without the required educational background.

On the other hand

, those who advocate for entering the

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workforce

directly after school argue that

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practical

experience

is more valuable than

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theoretical knowledge. They posit that on-the

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job training

job-training

and real-work

experience

can provide

individuals

with a competitive edge in the job market.

Therefore

, in business, it would be more important for a candidate to have soft skills and

experience

in that line of business so they can step into a position without

further

training and be of immediate benefit to the association. In my opinion, both paths have their merits and the most effective route to a successful career may vary depending on an

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personal circumstances, goals, and aspirations. Ultimately, it is important for people to carefully consider their options and make

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informed decision that aligns with their long-term career objectives.