The two diagrams describe the main parts of a hot air balloon and indicate how it works. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.

The two diagrams describe the main parts of a hot air balloon and indicate how it works.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.
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The diagram details the various components of a hot
air
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balloon
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and describes its mechanics. As is evident from the diagram, the three key parts of a hot
air
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balloon
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are the
envelope
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, the
basket
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and the
burner
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.
In addition
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, the hot
air
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balloon
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’s mechanism for ascending and descending revolves around the thermal regulation of
air
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. The main part of a hot
balloon
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is a large
envelope
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which has an inverted teardrop shape. At the top is the ‘parachute valve’ which is a self-sealing flap used to regulate the pace at which hot
air
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escapes. The large vertical sections below the valve are called ‘gores’, which are made up of smaller panels. The
envelope
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tapers into a small base called a ‘skirt’. The skirt is attached to the
basket
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using ropes, and the
burner
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hangs above the
basket
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. Inside the
basket
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are propane tanks which are used to power the
burner
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. Regarding the function of the hot
air
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balloon
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, the
burner
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combines regular
air
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with propane to heat the
air
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trapped inside the
envelope
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, which
then
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becomes lighter and
thus
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makes the
balloon
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buoyant.
To begin
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a descent, the
air
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is cooled and effectively becomes heavier, pulling the hot
air
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balloon
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downward.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words air, balloon, envelope, basket, burner with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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