Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Genetic
modification
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problem in
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in
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present time. Some
individauls
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individuals
believe that it will enhance
people
’s lives in several methods. Others think that it may be a danger to life on
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planet. In my opinion, genetic engineering can improve
people
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lives in diverse ways including,
people
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health, and
food
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supply chain. On the one hand, some think genetic engineering
modification
can pose a threat to life on
earth
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.
This
is because until now scientists do not have enough information about
long-term
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the long-term
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effect
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effects
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of genetic engineering .
For example
, maybe
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genes
modified for
food
can leads to
spread
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unknowon
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unknown
diseases, which have can
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negative
impacts
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impact
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on
people
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health.
Furthermore
, genetic engineering for
humans
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genes
maybe
make
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people
more vulnerable to get illnesses namely,cancer, brain stroke, and heart attack.
On the other hand
, I would like to agree with those
people
who believe
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engineering
modification
will
boosts
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people
’s lives in different forms.
To begin
with, researchers can make
genes
modified in
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the baby
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baby
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babies
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before born in order to prevent children get serious diseases namely, cancer,
diabates
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diabetes
, and disabilities.
Therefore
, engineering
modification
can have positive impacts on
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healt
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health
of
people
.
Moreover
, engineering
modification
for
food
can enhance
food
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supply chain
for
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apply
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the
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worldwide.
This
is because
genes
modified for
food
can make
food
more
resist
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for
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insects and grow faster, which
mean
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increase
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the
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agriculture harvest for farmers.
Consequently
, genetic engineering can contribute to
avoid
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the world problems related
of
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shortage
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the shortage
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of
food
.
To sum up
, from my perspective , genetic engineering can
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people
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health
as well as
provide
food
security.
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