Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarcric. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourits who visit such places?
Nowadays, travellers are increasingly visiting
places
where conditions
are difficult, such
as the Sahara Desert
or the Antarctic. This
leads to both advantages and disadvantages for visitors because of some major reasons which I shall explain in more detail in this
essay.
To begin
, we can see that the development of technology and the economy encourage more and more people
to visit challenging areas. This
leads to the benefits in growing individuals's knowledge and experience because if people
explore places
with difficult conditions
, they will have opportunities to undergo special environments which are different which their common environment. For example
, those who travel to the Sahara desert
where the weather is extreme so can not only learn how to survive in the desert
but also
come into contact with the desert
realistically. Therefore
, when people
have opportunities to live in difficult places
, they will be more skilful and calm to face the challenges of other similar conditions
places
.
On the other hand
, travelling to places
where conditions
are difficult also
brings disadvantages for travellers because the conditions
of these places
are very different and extreme compared with their common environment. Thus
, it is easy to cause accidents. For instance
, in my country, there are many people
who fall down when they are climbing to wild mountain yearly. Another example is my friends who are living in Ho Chi Minh City where the weather is warm around the year travelled to Sapa, a region located in Northern Vietnam where the weather was very cool last
week. Consequently
, she has been sick because of a different climate.
In conclusion, today more and more tourists are visiting places
where conditions
are difficult, such
as the Sahara Desert
or the Antarctic. This
brings benefits of enhancing people
's knowledge as well as
experience and disadvantages of unexpected accidents for visitors who visit such
places
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