Some people think the government should support artists like painters, musicians, and poets, while others believe this wastes money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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globalisation and the spread of social media, people spend less time doing

culture

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cultural

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activities, like

visit

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museums or

enjoy

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an evening in a theatre.

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, many people think

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useless that nations spend

money

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to support artists. I partially agree with

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idea, and I will explain both

point

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of view in

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essay. There are a few important reasons to support

artist

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artists

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financially. First of all, artists are essential for

maintain

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and

increase

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the status of our culture.

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, children and teenagers can benefit from

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situation, and learn a lot of knowledge

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develop many skills, like critical thinking and imagination.

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, being an artist is a hard choice, since if you cannot gain fame, you will not earn so much

money

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.

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, generally,

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kind of worker became famous only when they pass away. For these reasons, it is essential that governments offer their help to artists, maybe covering some

cost

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, like the equipment and the rent of spaces.

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, in our

society

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there are many other issues that countries must cope with them.

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, some nations have a high percentage of unemployed or an ineffective health system.

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, it is obvious that governments should invest

money

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immediately to tackle these awful situations.

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, there are other types of

job

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jobs

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that are not well-paid, so why governments do not help everybody? In conclusion, I believe that there is not a “black or white” situation, rather each country should spend their

money

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intelligently. In brief, a possible solution could be choosing every year a different area / department that should be supported.