Some people think the government should support artists like painters, musicians, and poets, while others believe this wastes money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays,
due to
the
globalisation and the spread of social media, people spend less time doing Correct article usage
apply
culture
activities, like Replace the word
cultural
visit
museums or Wrong verb form
visiting
enjoy
an evening in a theatre. Wrong verb form
enjoying
Therefore
, many people think that is
useless that nations spend money
to support artists. I partially agree with this
idea, and I will explain both point
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this
essay.
There are a few important reasons to support artist
financially. First of all, artists are essential for Fix the agreement mistake
artists
maintain
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maintaining
increase
the status of our culture. Wrong verb form
increasing
For example
, children and teenagers can benefit from this
situation, and learn a lot of knowledge as well as
develop many skills, like critical thinking and imagination. Furthermore
, being an artist is a hard choice, since if you cannot gain fame, you will not earn so much money
. In addition
, generally, this
kind of worker became famous only when they pass away. For these reasons, it is essential that governments offer their help to artists, maybe covering some cost
, like the equipment and the rent of spaces.
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costs
On the other hand
, in our society
there are many other issues that countries must cope with them. Add a comma
,society
For instance
, some nations have a high percentage of unemployed or an ineffective health system. Hence
, it is obvious that governments should invest money
immediately to tackle these awful situations. Additionally
, there are other types of job
that are not well-paid, so why governments do not help everybody?
In conclusion, I believe that there is not a “black or white” situation, rather each country should spend their Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
money
intelligently. In brief, a possible solution could be choosing every year a different area / department that should be supported.Submitted by quarenghi.lisa on
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