You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows four countries of residence of overseas students in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the selected counties of residence of visitor arrival for education in Australia from 1982 to 2000.
Overall
, it is clear from the chart that the largest number of visitors was from Indonesia in 1998 around 26 , when the lowest rate of students
was in 1987 from Hong Kong and Singapore by one or two.
Looking at the line graph for more details, the number of students
from Indonesia rapidly increased from 1994 to 1998 , while
the number of students
from Malaysia steadily levelled out from 1983 to 1994 about 10 students
only every year. Moreover
, it went up slightly from 1994 to 1997 from 10 to 17 and then
went down to 15 in 1999.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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