Business and Money In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the modern
era
some countries provide Add a comma
,era
opportunity
for Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
people
to earn unlimited money. Therefore
, many people
believe that this
action
has beneficial results, however
, a group of citizens believe that the government should take an
Correct article usage
apply
action
and restricts the upper-
Correct your spelling
upper limit
limit
of salaries
of people
. From my point of view, high salaries
for ambitious people
should not be restricted.
On the one hand, citizens with enormous amounth
of Correct your spelling
amount
amounts
salaries
is
a great Correct subject-verb agreement
are
opportunity
for individuals who want to improve their incomes,
and start up their own Remove the comma
apply
businesses
. This
opportunity
not only improves their financial status,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
provides a competitive environment for market places
in a city. Correct your spelling
marketplaces
For instance
, people
who earn high salaries
can invest these money
for their side jobs or even their start-ups. Change the determiner
this money
Moreover
, these actions might trigger that
more Correct word choice
apply
people
could launch their own businesses
and assist the country
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country's
economy
.
On the other hand
, a group of people
believe that people
with huge income
can be a Fix the agreement mistake
incomes
treat
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threat
for
local markets, and senior Change preposition
to
businesses
. Because these people
can launch their own businesses
, and increase the competition. Nevertheless
, I believe this
possible action
only affects the monopolies in the city. Controlling the amount of money that people
earn only cause a
untrusted financial environment in the country. Change the article
an
For example
, many middle-east countries such
as Turkey, Azerbaijan, and Afghanistan tried to restricts
individuals' income Wrong verb form
restrict
limit
, and they all experienced hyperinflation Fix the agreement mistake
limits
due to
unreliable economy
. I believe, if governments want to keep balance in their national Fix the agreement mistake
economies
economy
, they have to avoid to
Change the verb form
limiting
limit
people'
Change noun form
people's
salaries
.
In conclusion, some people
have the common sense of people
with extreme
high incomes are beneficial for their nations, Change the adjective
extremely
on the contrary
, others agreed that the government should take an
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apply
action
on their salaries
, and limit
the amount that people
earn. Personally, government
should not Add an article
the government
limit
people'
annual income Change noun form
people's
that
can be an Correct pronoun usage
which
opportunity
for new companies and improved
Wrong verb form
improve
national
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the national
economy
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