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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I am writing in regard to express my interest in your advert which you have put for the coming summer. I will be able to assist you in many ways with the daily chores.
Firstly
, deep cleaning is one of my expertise. As I could see on your flyer that you have a dog, I personally know how hair fall will be in any house who have pets. I like to share that I am A++ certified in cleaning and in our
city
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 we only have very few with these credentials.
Furthermore
, I could take your dog for a walk.
Secondly
, I am a certified gardener too,
this
 was my passion since childhood. Summer is the right time to keep the garden in the right condition. Even more, I would love to suggest an organic way of growing a few vegetables. I am a second-year psychology student at London College. Generally, summer is break time for us, so I like to do more part-time hours by which I can pay some of my tuition fees. And I am more interested to do
this
 job because it involves people interaction, as my aim is to become a Psychologist.
This
 way it helps me to read people's behaviour patterns. I am available from 8AM to 10AM, later I need to assist in the Daycare services which is near palace road. If morning is not an option for you, I can join at 1PM and will be around for 2 hours. Post that at 3:30PM I will be working at a grocery store. I look forward to hearing back from you. Have a pleasant day ahead!
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • ecosystems
  • wildlife
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • air pollution
  • strict regulations
  • plastic consumption
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • sustainable packaging
  • recycling facilities
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