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The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010

The graph gives information about coffee production in 4 different countries from 1990 to 2010
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The given bar chart compares 4 different nations in terms of
coffee
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production
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 between 1990 and 2010.
Overall
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, Brazil had the highest
coffee
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production
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 in the whole period
while
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 the opposite was true for Vietnam.
In addition
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, Columbia was the only country with decreased
coffee
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production
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 throughout the years. Looking at the graph in detail, Brazil produced 0.7
million
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tonnes
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 of
coffee
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 in 1990, compared to just 0.2
million
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tonnes
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 produced by Indonesia. 20 years later, the
production
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 in Brazil nearly tripled and reached 1.9
million
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tonnes
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, consolidating its leading position among the surveyed countries. Meanwhile, the figure for Indonesia doubled and reached 0.4
million
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tonnes
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 in 2010. Regarding the two remaining countries, the amount of
coffee
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 which was produced in Columbia was six times higher than that of Vietnam, at about 0.6
million
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tonnes
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 compared to 0.1
million
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tonnes
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.
However
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, the two figures saw opposite trends in the following 20 years. The
production
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 in Columbia saw a twofold decrease
whereas
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 the figure for Vietnam tripled. In 2010, the amounts of
coffee
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production
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 in both countries were equal, at 0.3
million
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tonnes
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, production, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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