The graph below shows that the persentage of Australian export to four countries from 1990 to 2012
The diagram illustrates the changes in Australian
export
to four main countries between 1990 and 2012.
Overall
, applying the main part of export
went to Japan, whereas
India and China smallest minority of the total.
It is clear that
Japan took the biggest part in export
in 1990 (25%). However
, in the middle of the total is the US in 1990 it takes approximately 11% of all export
. The smallest pieces took China and India in 1990, just 3%.
However
, export
to India considerably grows to 27% by the end of the period. Although
, export
to China gradually increase to just 7% in 2012. Whereas
, export
to Japan far decreased to 17% by the end of the period. By applying contrast, export
to the US decrease to 7% in 2012.Submitted by pasha2400 on
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