The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.

The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
The data displays the proportion of global
pineapple
exports by the three biggest
pineapple
producers including cost breakdown for each
pineapple
paid by the consumer in two distinct years ( 2009 and 2019)
Overall
, it can clearly
seen
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that country B was the highest exporter in 2009
while
in 2019 country A takes the lead for the high proportion of
pineapple
exporters globally, and the distribution and retail section was the majority of the cost
which
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paid by the consumer for each
pineapple
. In the period shown on the bar chart, nation A experienced an increase of about 9
million
higher than at the starting value, and the same thing happened in nation C which witnessed a little increase during the period of the year for approximately half a
million
while
country by at the starting value accounted for about 5
million
then
a decade after decreased to just over 1
million
. Looking at the pie chart, 5 of 7 categories had a percentage above 10% which were distribution and retail, taxes, profit, import license and international transport
whereas
export costs and producer accounted for 4% and 5%, respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • dominant
  • emerging trends
  • production costs
  • transportation
  • retailer markup
  • global trade dynamics
  • sustainability
  • market demand
  • economic factors
  • export volumes
  • logistic costs
  • retail price
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