The chart below shows information about animals at various nature reserves in 2010.

The chart below shows information about animals at various nature reserves in 2010.
The given bar chart compares the number of
zebras
and
buffaloes
kept in 4 different
nature
reserves in the year 2010.
Overall
, Beachwood was home to the highest quantity of
animals
. Another noteworthy observation is that
buffaloes
outnumbered
zebras
in most
nature
reserves except Bukit Timah which bucked the trend. It is
also
noticeable that the figures for the two
animals
were relatively similar in Cape
Nature
. Looking at the graph in detail, Beachwood ranked first with the highest number of
animals
kept here, with 83
zebras
and 120
buffaloes
.
In addition
, Klipriviersberg was home to 70
zebras
and 115
buffaloes
. Meanwhile, the figures for
zebras
and
buffaloes
kept in Cape
Nature
were 78 and 81 respectively. In terms of Bukit Timah, there was a different pattern.
While
there were 58
zebras
kept here, the figure for
buffaloes
was much lower, at 40. Noticeably, Bukit Timah was
also
home to the lowest number of
animals
among the four reserves under study.
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