The bar chart compares 7 various factories that utilize ground and public water supply in a country. Data are expressed in millions of cubic meters.
The chart shows the
amount
of millions of cubic Change the quantifier
number
meters
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public
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of public
water
and Use synonyms
groundwater
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is
used by 7 Unnecessary verb
apply
factories
namely Use synonyms
fuel
, foods or Use synonyms
dirnks
, machinery, metal, chemicals, paper and textiles in a country.
In general, it can be seen that chemical Correct your spelling
drinks
factories
use the most Use synonyms
groundwater
and public Use synonyms
water
. Meanwhile, Use synonyms
fuel
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companies
and textiles Use synonyms
companies
use those two Use synonyms
water
sources the least.
It is clear the Use synonyms
groundwater
that the chemical company is the leader in Use synonyms
groundwater
use with 430 Use synonyms
million
cubic Use synonyms
meters
. In the second place, the gas company uses 240 Use synonyms
million
cubic Use synonyms
meters
of Use synonyms
water
. In third place, 190 Use synonyms
million
cubic Use synonyms
meters
of Use synonyms
water
are used by the paper Use synonyms
factories
. In fourth place, the food company used 110 Use synonyms
million
cubic Use synonyms
meters
of Use synonyms
water
. Next are the textiles Use synonyms
companies
and the Use synonyms
fuel
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companies
, which used 80 Use synonyms
million
cubic Use synonyms
meters
of Use synonyms
water
and 70 Use synonyms
million
cubic Use synonyms
meters
of Use synonyms
water
respectively . And at least, the machine plant uses only 10 Use synonyms
million
cubic Use synonyms
meters
of Use synonyms
groundwater
.
The graph illustrates that the most used public Use synonyms
water
source is still a chemical plant with 240 Use synonyms
million
cubic Use synonyms
meters
, more than 50 Use synonyms
million
cubic Use synonyms
meters
than a food Use synonyms
factory
and nearly 1,5 times more than a machinery Use synonyms
factory
. Use synonyms
This
is followed by a metal Linking Words
factory
using 90 Use synonyms
million
cubic Use synonyms
meters
of Use synonyms
water
and a paper Use synonyms
factory
using 20 Use synonyms
million
cubic Use synonyms
meters
of Use synonyms
water
. Use synonyms
Finally
, there are textile Linking Words
factories
and Use synonyms
fuel
plants, each using 10 Use synonyms
million
cubic Use synonyms
meters
of Use synonyms
water
.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words meters, water, groundwater, factories, fuel, companies, million, factory with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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