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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give ypur own opinion.

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Whilst many people say that
advertisement
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 is fruitful at gaining new customers, others are of
an
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 opinion that it is not as effective as it was before
due to
 becoming commonplace in today's world.
While
 it is true that
average
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the average
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 commercial has less effect on people nowadays, their reach has widened a lot. In my opinion, commercials have drastically improved their efficiency. On the one hand, advertisements are increasingly playing a role in
monetisation
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the monetisation
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 of
webservices
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web services
 and because of their overwhelming presence on various
websites
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 users got used to skipping them without a second thought.
For instance
, YouTube advertisements have been known to be almost unconsciously closed since the company's monetisation privacy has been applied.
On the other hand
,
audience
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the audience
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 reach of each commercial has considerably increased. The increased reach compensates for the lessened impact they have on potential customers.
Furthermore
, they are
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