Technology has become an essential part of everybody's life.Nowadays, many adults are working from home and the most children are prefer to study from home.

Technology has become an essential part of everybody's life.Nowadays, many adults are working from

home

and

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most children

are prefer

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to study from

home

.Because

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technology become more accessible and affordable for everybody and opens a significant number of opportunities.Personally,

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tend to think that it has a negative effect,

development

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for youngsters but

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for adults.

Firstly

,working from

home

become more and more popular among matures.There are amount of jobs

such

as a

contentmaker

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content maker

,management,

web-designer

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,copywriter and so on.It is very useful for

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with many children.

Moreover

, you do not need to waste time and money

to

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commuting to work.It is safer. There is no risk of an accident

while

travelling to or from work.

Also

,

this

kind of

jobs

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do

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not require any special

equipments

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equipment

.Desirable to be

creative

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,self-motivated,responsible person.

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, as my mother is concerned, she is

copywriter

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at

home

about

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one year. On the other hand, there are harmful effects for students that study from

home

.

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, a child socially isolated from the surroundings

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not develop their social communication skills.

Therefore

, parents should constantly control their study process.

Furthermore

, the lack of strict discipline and so on.From my own experience,

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was in

home schooling

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homeschooling

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until

six

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grade. I acknowledged that

such

a format of studying is not suitable for sociable,active extroverts and slothful, incapable of

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children. In conclusion, technology is common and vital part of our lives. I consider that only adults should work from a distance as youngsters might be influenced by studying online.