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: The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

: The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart below shows details about the
price
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 of
bananas
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 in different
countries
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 like
Japan
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,
France
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,Germany and the USA from 1994 to 2004.
Overall
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,
This
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 chart has information related to
bananas
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 in four
countries
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 where horizontally shows the time period in
years
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as well as
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 vertically seems that the
price
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 of
bananas
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 is in US dollar units per kilogram.
Firstly
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, the USA shows only a little bit of fluctuation in the
price
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 of
bananas
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 from 1 to 1.5
USD
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 from 1197 to 1998.
After
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this
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 rising in rates
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 constant till 2004.
On the other hand
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, the remaining 3
countries
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 show too many ups and downs in the
price
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 of a banana. Germany decline the rate first 3
years
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 with 0.5
USD
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 from 1996 to 1999.After 1999 the
price
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 increased gradually from 1.25 to 2 in the next 4
years
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 and the rate decreased till 2004.
Japan
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 and
France
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 show many fluctuations in the graph.In ,
France
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 banana
price
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 is constant at 2
USD
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 for the first two
years
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.On the other ,side
Japan
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 increases the
price
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. After the first two
years
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 both
countries
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 fluctuation with the next 4
years
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 till 2002. After that
Japan
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 suddenly change the
price
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 from 2.5 to 1.5
USD
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 in 2003
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 again prices are rises in the next year 2004.
France
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 increased prices and
then
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 remain constant on where it started.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, bananas, countries, japan, france, years, usd with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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