The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, mobile phones have become the most essential portable
devices
people tend to Use synonyms
be carried
around everywhere, whether to work, to school or to do some sort of entertainment activities. Some members of society argue that those Wrong verb form
carry
devices
should be prohibited in certain areas and places as the way smoking Use synonyms
had
been banned. From my perspective, I am totally against Wrong verb form
has
this
notion Linking Words
due
many reasons. In the following paragraphs, I will explain my position and I will clarify it with some sorts of examples and clarifications.
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To begin
with, there are many reasons behind the importance of allowing the public to carry their smartphones anywhere. The main reason is the multi-tasks that Linking Words
can
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apply
this
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phone
provides with the power of the internet. To clarify, smart Use synonyms
devices
can perform many tasks despite their main task (communication) Use synonyms
such
as socializing, reading books, listening to music, conducting meetings, attending lectures, reading news entertainment Linking Words
and
etc. Those features keep the community posted and aware of recent events in all regards. Correct word choice
apply
Furthermore
, some people can perform their careers with those Linking Words
devices
. Use synonyms
For example
, language learning classes are not limited to the centres or physical education institutions any more, there are many Linking Words
phone
applications like Kampily where teachers can communicate with actual students to teach them the language they need anywhere and anytime.
The second main reason is using a smartphone can not harm the community the way smoking does. If smoking is compared with clicking, justice will not be served. It is not fair to compare smoking habits with using a mobile Use synonyms
phone
just like Use synonyms
for instance
, it is not fair to compare fire with water. As it is known, the consumption of cigarettes Linking Words
is
not Verb problem
does
harming
only the person who smokes but Verb problem
apply
also
affects anyone who breathes Linking Words
this
infected air ,Linking Words
while
being occupied by a mobile Linking Words
phone
can not have an effect on anyone else but the Use synonyms
phone
user.
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To sum up
, I believe that the usage of smartphones can not be banned like smoking Linking Words
due to
two significant reasons, the limitation of mobile negative effect on other people and the unlimited benefits of mobile features.Linking Words
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