The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, mobile phones have become the most essential portable
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people tend to
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around everywhere, whether to work, to school or to do some sort of entertainment activities. Some members of society argue that those
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should be prohibited in certain areas and places as the way smoking
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been banned. From my perspective, I am totally against
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notion
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many reasons. In the following paragraphs, I will explain my position and I will clarify it with some sorts of examples and clarifications.
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with, there are many reasons behind the importance of allowing the public to carry their smartphones anywhere. The main reason is the multi-tasks that
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provides with the power of the internet. To clarify, smart
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can perform many tasks despite their main task (communication)
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as socializing, reading books, listening to music, conducting meetings, attending lectures, reading news entertainment
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etc. Those features keep the community posted and aware of recent events in all regards.
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, some people can perform their careers with those
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.
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, language learning classes are not limited to the centres or physical education institutions any more, there are many
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applications like Kampily where teachers can communicate with actual students to teach them the language they need anywhere and anytime. The second main reason is using a smartphone can not harm the community the way smoking does. If smoking is compared with clicking, justice will not be served. It is not fair to compare smoking habits with using a mobile
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just like
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, it is not fair to compare fire with water. As it is known, the consumption of cigarettes
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only the person who smokes but
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affects anyone who breathes
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infected air ,
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being occupied by a mobile
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can not have an effect on anyone else but the
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user.
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, I believe that the usage of smartphones can not be banned like smoking
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two significant reasons, the limitation of mobile negative effect on other people and the unlimited benefits of mobile features.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • antisocial
  • social interactions
  • negative impacts
  • banning
  • regulated
  • completely banned
  • education
  • awareness campaigns
  • responsible
  • mobile phone use
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