The map shows how coastal land develops into a coastal park.
The provided maps illustrate how a coastal
park
has been developed on land
near the sea.
In general, the land
has been used for agricultural purposes which now is replaced by the facilities and infrastructures of a coastal park
.
The initial plan of the land
incorporates three different sites, including an
agricultural Remove the article
apply
land
, animal
section, and a fam building alongside an unused space in the west. From Correct article usage
an animal
north
, a road, parallel to Add an article
the north
the a
line of cliffs Choose an article
the
a
alonge
the beach in the south, is passing above the Correct your spelling
along
land
.
In the present figure, the building is replaced by a parking space in the centre of park
where a cafe is available for visitors Add an article
the park
in
the northeast side of that. Change preposition
on
Moreover
, there is a lake in
the west side of the Change preposition
on
park
and a woods site on the east. Furthermore
, visitors can enjoy walking on a footpath which is connecting the lake in the west to the woods in the east passing through the parking space.Submitted by TUTOO on
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