The bar chart compares 7 various factories that utilize ground and public water supply in a country. Data are expressed in millions of cubic meters.

The bar chart compares 7 various factories that utilize ground and public water supply in a country. Data are expressed in millions of cubic meters.
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The given bar chart represents 7 different factories that utilize
ground
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and public
water
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supply in millions of cubic meters in a particular country and each factory is compared across others in
terms
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of their usage. The chemicals sector has the highest consumption
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that of fuel has the lowest. In
terms
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of utilisation of both the sources of
water
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, the chemicals niche stands at 430 for the underground source and 240 for the general supply and
this
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figure holds true for the metal sector in
terms
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of their underground source
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for the normal
water
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availability, it stands at 90. For the foods/drinks, the number is 110 and 190 respectively for the
ground
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and general supply. For the paper industry, it uses maximum
water
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from beneath the
ground
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with a value of 190 and 20 for the other.
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, for the other three, in
terms
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of the utilisation of
water
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from beneath the
ground
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and the other supply, the figures are 70 and 10 for fuel, 10 and 100 for machinery and at
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, 80 and 10 for textiles.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ground, water, terms with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
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