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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart provides the percentage of city residents
survey
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who survey
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coffee
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 and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Which includes; Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. As
it
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apply
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can be seen, almost 60% of residents in Sydney went to a cafe for
coffee
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 or tea in
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last
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the last
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 four
weeks
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.
However
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, the amount of residents that bought
a
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apply
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fresh
coffee
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 in
Linking Words
last
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the last
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 four
weeks
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 is nearly 47%.
Furthermore
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, 45% of
local
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locals
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 bought instant
coffee
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 in
Linking Words
last
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the last
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 four
weeks
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. We can notice the highest percentage in five cities in
Australia
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, went to a cafe for
coffee
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 or tea in
Linking Words
last
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the last
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 4 days. What's more, the
houseown
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house down
house own
 in
the
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apply
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Australia
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 seems a little lowest to bought fresh
coffee
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 in
last
Linking Words
 4 day.
In addition
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, around 50%
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of local
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local
Fix the agreement mistake
locals
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 in
Australia
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 went to buy instant
coffee
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 in
Linking Words
last
Correct article usage
the last
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 4
weeks
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.
Overall
Linking Words
, in every city in
Australia
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 are different habits. As well, often the percentage will increase or
deceases
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decreases
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 in the future.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, weeks, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • coffee
  • tea
  • buying habits
  • drinking habits
  • Australian cities
  • consumption
  • respondents
  • regular
  • participants
  • levels
  • observed
  • popular
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