Some people believe that zoos are inhumane and should be closed down. Others argue that zoos play an important role in wildlife conservation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, we have

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all around the world to preserve endangered

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and to the purpose of introducing these

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to people.

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some people think that

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are necessary to protect wildlife

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others believe that

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lifestyle is not acceptable for

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and should not be allowed. I will discuss both viewpoints and elaborate

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reasons why I side with the latter opinion defending that putting

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in a small place for a lifetime is unacceptable. On the one hand,

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might play an important role in protecting endangered species by providing them with essential conditions to survive. Since the biggest issue in the wild is difficulty to find food and water sources,

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can help the

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by providing these basic needs.

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, these controlled

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might give a chance for treatment to

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with serious injuries and help to increase their lifetime. More than that, with controlled breeding next generations could be produced and animal genes can be preserved.

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, removing

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from their natural habitats can lead to a lot of problems

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as an imbalance in nature.

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, removing one animal from the food chain can affect all other species in the food pyramid.

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, as all the natural balance would be affected negatively changing the natural system should not be that easy.

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all of these, putting an animal in a very small living place can cause a lot of behavioural disorders

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, these disorders will lead to other mental and physical conditions. In conclusion, there are some believers that menageries are necessary to keep wild

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alive and protect their generations for long years

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others argue that

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are inhumane

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for

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as they are way smaller than

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need and change balance of the nature. I believe animal welfare is more important than everything and the protection of endangered species can be done without changing their natural habitats. I opine

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have gone out of their purpose and have become touristic

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only.

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, as a veterinarian, I believe as these conditions cause more problems than help,

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are unacceptable

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for

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.