The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
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The bar graph gives information about the
number
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of
car
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journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents over a decade.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
number
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of residents travelling by
car
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experienced a downward trend whilst non-residents made up an upward trend.
However
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, both figures had some fluctuation throughout the given period. In 1996, the
number
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of
car
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journeys by locals was about 10 000, higher than the non-residents’
figure
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.
Then
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, it continued with a little fluctuation between 1997 and 1999.
However
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, the
figure
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by residents declined rapidly, introducing Parking meters into the city centre in 2000 after which the
number
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depicted the oscillation until the end of the year.
In contrast
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, the latter
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was twice as low as its former one at just 5000 in 1996. After Parking meters were introduced by the government into the city non-residents’
figure
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increased slightly by 3000 in 1999. And
then
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car
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journeys by not living in
this
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area stayed stable after bringing in Parking meters till 2002.
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, it shrank significantly when Westgate Street and Park Lane closed.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, car, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "gives" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • residents
  • non-residents
  • urban planning
  • traffic management
  • regulate
  • measures
  • impact
  • increase
  • decrease
  • compare
  • explore
  • evaluate
  • potential
  • journey
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