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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #risks #lives
Previously, people would live a very simple life. Having no
competitions
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 among each other.
However
, nowadays the scenario has changed and in
today
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 world to win and compete everyone must take risks whether it’s personal or professional life, all individuals should give their best to succeed. In
this
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due
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 what reason it is advantageous rather than disadvantageous. People take risks in their professional
as well as
 personal lives because of
few
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 reasons.
Firstly
, taking
risk
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 is considered the prime factor in establishing a business. History has proved, those who had taken
risk
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 have had huge success in the end.
For instance
, Malik Riaz owner of
Bahria
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 Town housing scheme, was once a contractor on a very small scale.
However
, one day he decided to step into big business by lending a lot of money from different sources and took a
risk
 and spent the money in a random housing scheme and today the same place now has worth of billions. By taking
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 in his personal and professional life, Malik Riaz made it
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 a very successful business.
Secondly
, no doubt
risk takers
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 sometimes do face huge
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losses
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 but for
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 they always keep their eyes and brain open. And here comes the
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 that take
risk
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 in their professional lives but ask their Financial Analysts to forecast if their
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 will get them benefited or not.
Although
 the
risk
 remains the same
nevertheless
 its failure ratio decreases that’s why businessmen rely on their Accounts department. In conclusion, I will say yes, the advantages of taking
risk
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 are more than their disadvantages. If a person takes
risk
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 and is successful,
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 better than sitting idle and not taking
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. The only disadvantage to taking
risk
 is
person
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a person
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 might lose their money but there are plenty of technologies now that does accurate predictions and reduces your level of
risk
 and boosts your confidence to invest.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Opportunities
  • Growth
  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
  • Calculated risks
  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
  • Entrepreneurship
  • Adventurous spirit
  • Thriving
  • Failure
  • Mitigate
  • Reap the rewards
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