Government of developing country should spend more on projects (eg new tourist hotel, factories) to improve local economy and less on facilities (eg health and education) To what extent do you agree or disagree

Every governments have different

strategies

to improve their national economies all around the world. These

strategies

,

however

, could be spending more money on projects that attract new

tourists

, or building industrial

facilities

. There is a common belief that governments of developing countries should follow these

strategies

to develop their local

economy

rather than invest in the health and education sectors. From my point of view, they should focus on these

strategies

, and should not waste their time with the latter investments. On the one hand, projects that bring more resources into the country

such

as building luxurious

hotels

, and different industrial

factories

are excellent economical models for attracting foreign entrepreneurs, and

tourists

.

For example

,

hotels

,especially

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in the correct places, provide opportunities for local markets and the citizens who are living and working there. Because of the foreign currency influx in the city, they have a chance to improve their incomes in the long term.

On the contrary

, many geographical regions are not available for

hotels

or touristic activities. These rural lands should be evaluated for industrial activities for the local

economy

.

Factories

,

for instance

, not only improve the job opportunities for locals

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but

also

assist in technological developments for the country in the future.

On the other hand

, investing in healthcare services and education

facilities

is crucial for society and a sustainable

economy

.

Nevertheless

, their assistance for the domestic

economy

is not as significant as tourism or industrial investments. Hospitals and public universities,

for instance

, do not improve the local

economy

, whether they are important for the citizens' well-being and education.

This

is the reason I prefer to focus financial resources on the sectors that provide currency influx in the city.

Therefore

, launching new

factories

or building

hotels

can rose domestic incomes,

on the contrary

investing in healthcare or educational

facilities

may be a burden for their economies. In conclusion, all governments have different ideas for improving local economies. Eventually, they should attract new investors and

tourists

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building new

hotels

, and

factories

for improving financial incomes. Hospitals and public schools might not be excellent profitable

facilities

,

although

both are essential for the citizens. From my point of view, they should chase new investors and

tourists

.