Government of developing country should spend more on projects (eg new tourist hotel, factories) to improve local economy and less on facilities (eg health and education) To what extent do you agree or disagree

Every governments have different

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to improve their national economies all around the world. These

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,

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, could be spending more money on projects that attract new

tourists

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, or building industrial

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. There is a common belief that governments of developing countries should follow these

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to develop their local

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rather than invest in the health and education sectors. From my point of view, they should focus on these

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, and should not waste their time with the latter investments. On the one hand, projects that bring more resources into the country

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as building luxurious

hotels

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, and different industrial

factories

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are excellent economical models for attracting foreign entrepreneurs, and

tourists

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in the correct places, provide opportunities for local markets and the citizens who are living and working there. Because of the foreign currency influx in the city, they have a chance to improve their incomes in the long term.

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, many geographical regions are not available for

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or touristic activities. These rural lands should be evaluated for industrial activities for the local

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Factories

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, not only improve the job opportunities for locals

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but

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assist in technological developments for the country in the future.

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, investing in healthcare services and education

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is crucial for society and a sustainable

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, their assistance for the domestic

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is not as significant as tourism or industrial investments. Hospitals and public universities,

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, do not improve the local

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, whether they are important for the citizens' well-being and education.

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is the reason I prefer to focus financial resources on the sectors that provide currency influx in the city.

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, launching new

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or building

hotels

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can rose domestic incomes,

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investing in healthcare or educational

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may be a burden for their economies. In conclusion, all governments have different ideas for improving local economies. Eventually, they should attract new investors and

tourists

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building new

hotels

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, and

factories

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for improving financial incomes. Hospitals and public schools might not be excellent profitable

facilities

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both are essential for the citizens. From my point of view, they should chase new investors and

tourists

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