Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem.
Nowadays, the issue of worldwide animal extinction has become a strongly debated topic. A wide range of species almost disappeared completely in the past few decades,
while
many others are close enough to do the same. Linking Words
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due to
the enormously increased human activity in their habitats. In my essay, I am going to reveal the reasons behind Linking Words
this
, and I try to suggest some solutions as well.
The biggest reason behind disappearing most of these animals is hunting. Linking Words
For instance
, in some Asian countries buying a tooth of a tiger on the black market is a very popular habit. Linking Words
This
leads to the fact, that the illegal hunting of tigers is growing continuously. Linking Words
In addition
, many other species are in danger related to global climate change. Linking Words
For example
, the living area of polar bears is decreasing dramatically Linking Words
due to
the melting of icebergs at the North Pole.
As long as the most likely reason for animal extinction is the human impact on their habitats, the solution must be Linking Words
also
developed by us. Linking Words
According to
hunting, the government should give a strong response, like a prison sentence for those, who hunt tigers illegally. Linking Words
Furthermore
, reducing the emission of carbon dioxide can be effective to decrease global warming. Linking Words
This
might result in the growth of the living area of polar bears again.
In conclusion, human impact on wildlife has caused the extinction of some species. Both overhunting and global warming have serious effects on wildlife diversity. I strongly hope that mankind can solve these issues as soon as possible before it turns too late.Linking Words
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