what are the best qualities that i find in different parents

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Parents are the most precious relation in the world
however
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,bringing up personalities
have
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palenthra
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plethora
values that are crucially significant to groom a
kid
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personality.Some people said children have their own personality values others
beleive
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believe
their values
influenced
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by their parents.
This
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essay will show different qualities explained by examples. To
embarce
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embrace
on, house leaders are fully responsible to feed kids
therefore
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, one of them
are
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incharge
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in charge
for
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preparing food for the family members
besides
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,taking care of their
prefered
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preferred
taste whatever they like to eat .
Secondly
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,
house hold
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household
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chores should be well
manged
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managed
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.
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,that
involes
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involves
cleaning of
house
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as well as
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doing
loundry
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laundry
,ironing
cloths
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clothes
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,
managing
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and managing
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wear drops.For
examples
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,Pakistani parents perform
all day
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tasks
done
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by themselves. On the flip side, some people argue pupils are
self responsible
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for their
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person smile
personsile
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personal
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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