The table gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
This
table Linking Words
conveys
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shows
the
consumer spending on different items in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in the year 2002. Correct article usage
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Overall
the category that all society spent the most in was food, drinks and tobacco. Linking Words
whereas
the leisure and education category had the lowest spending. Clothing and footwear were in the middle place with average spending. Turkey takes the lead in food,drinks and tobacco Linking Words
with32.14
%, Correct your spelling
with 32.14
while
Sweden had the lowest spending at 15.77%. Linking Words
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hand
the lowest spending from all countries Add a comma
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were
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was
at
leisure and education, where Turkey still Change preposition
on
spends
the highest number Wrong verb form
spent
of
4.35%, and Spain with a sparse 1.98%. Change preposition
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Lastly
, the clothing and footwear category had average spending from most countries, but only Linking Words
this
time Italy made the highest expenditure of 9.00%, Linking Words
whereas
most countries' spending was between 5.40% to 6.63%.Linking Words
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