The table gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
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consumer spending on different items in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in the year 2002.
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the category that all society spent the most in was food, drinks and tobacco.
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the leisure and education category had the lowest spending. Clothing and footwear were in the middle place with average spending. Turkey takes the lead in food,drinks and tobacco
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with 32.14
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Sweden had the lowest spending at 15.77%.
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the lowest spending from all countries
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leisure and education, where Turkey still
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4.35%, and Spain with a sparse 1.98%.
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, the clothing and footwear category had average spending from most countries, but only
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time Italy made the highest expenditure of 9.00%,
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most countries' spending was between 5.40% to 6.63%.
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  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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