The local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are living Write a letter to the editor of the local newspaper: - Where did you hear this news and your opinion? - The reason why you protest it - Make suggestions for what people can or should do to stop the development

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to request you to publish an article in your newspaper related to the changes that are going to be made in the near future by the local council. They are planning to construct a residential building in the area of the

park

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which is located exactly beside my colony. Committee members of my society heard

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news

as well as

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they saw some workers that were measuring the area of the

park

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and talked that the ground of the

park

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is very powerful and it is suitable to hold a five to seven-storey building. In my perspective,

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is the only open space for people who are living in the south of

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town.

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park

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is not only helpful for elders but

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beneficial for children where they play numerous games.

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, me and other members of

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colony protest it and we want that the council should withdraw

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plan. So that, we can save the only open space of our

that is

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actually made for public use.

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, if the council will not drop

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process

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, people will go to the chairman of the State and if needed they will

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spread

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news all over the world through the Internet. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Harpreet Kaur.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

223 words

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