Some people think that it's a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it's important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that spending leisure
time
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colleagues
is enjoyable, Use synonyms
while
others disagree and believe that the Linking Words
time
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the reason why I believe it can be beneficial to hang out with Linking Words
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using spare Use synonyms
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.
On the one hand, it is reasonable that Use synonyms
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may want to separate their personal life from working conditions, as they can enjoy themselves as much as possible without any pressure. That means they can have enough Use synonyms
time
to spend with their loved Use synonyms
friends
or family members, which is Use synonyms
an
more relaxed period for most Change the article
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people
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,
because they can behave in their favourite manner without worrying about the negative expression they may make or potential obstacles they may cause because of their improper words. Remove the comma
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For example
, many individuals enjoy to lay on the sofa with their feet put on the table, and they can keep Linking Words
this
gesture before their relatives and close Linking Words
friends
, but it can be offensive if they use the post to talk with their leader, even if Use synonyms
at
Sunday night. Change the preposition
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Therefore
, it is quite reasonable that Linking Words
people
may choose to socialise with their close ones after Use synonyms
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without inviting their Use synonyms
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friends
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On the other hand
, many individuals enjoy spending spare Linking Words
time
with Use synonyms
colleagues
for many reasons. The major one is that in Use synonyms
this
way, they can foster their connections with their Linking Words
work
partners and benefit their Use synonyms
work
performance in the long term. Use synonyms
That is
because without intensive pressure and heavy tasks in workplaces, Linking Words
people
can express themselves better and show their actual personalities during leisure Use synonyms
time
, leading to a deeper understanding between Use synonyms
colleagues
, thereby, they can cooperate with each other in an endeavour after they return to Use synonyms
work
, and try to forgive them if others make some mistakes or ignore some detailed tasks, which can develop a greater sense of belonging to the whole team. Use synonyms
In addition
, spending Linking Words
time
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partners Use synonyms
in
weekends can Change preposition
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also
provide an opportunity for Linking Words
people
to make new Use synonyms
friends
and create valuable memories. Use synonyms
For instance
, it has been a culture for employees in Chinese high-tech companies to spend their Friday nights for drinks and Linking Words
alcohols
, which is highly commented on by workers, as they treat it as a special approach to establishing their collaboration relationships with their Fix the agreement mistake
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colleagues
.
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although
both sides have their merits, I firmly believe that Linking Words
people
should at least spend two hours a month hanging out with their Use synonyms
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friends
during their leisure Use synonyms
time
, and I have tried Use synonyms
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company, which benefit me and my Linking Words
colleagues
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also
make us good Linking Words
friends
until now.Use synonyms
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