The Graph Below Shows The Proportion Of Four Different Materials That Were Recycled From 1982 To 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled between 1982 and 2010.
Overall
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alumininium
cans and plastics rose gradually. From 1986 and 1990 in turn. Correct your spelling
aluminium
While
there was an upward trend from 1982 in the percentage of paper and cardboard, and glass containers.
First of all, the recycling rate of paper and cardboard was about 65% and increased to 70% in 1986. After Linking Words
that
it declines slightly nearly 65% again. Add a comma
,that
Next
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this
figure reaches a peak at 80% and gradually by 10% Linking Words
at the end
of the period. Linking Words
Secondly
, the proportion of glass containers was 50% at the beginning of the period and go down to 40% in 1990. Continuously, the figure rise sharply to 50% and there was a gradual rise from 1994 to 2010 ( from 50% to 60%).
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In addition
, the proportion of Linking Words
alumininium
cans in 1986 was below 10% and peaked dramatically over the period, at above 40% in 2010. Correct your spelling
aluminium
Furthermore
, there was a minimal rise in Linking Words
plastics’
Change noun form
plastics
figure
between 1990 and 2010, from about 5% to below 10%.Fix the agreement mistake
figures
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