Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Different people have different views regarding environmental troubles.

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, some people

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that the loss of important vegetation and

animals

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is the number one problem in nature.

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, others think that

pollution

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, global warming and increasing traffic are more vulnerable issues in our surroundings. In

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essay, I will discuss both views and give my point of view

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of the essay. On the one hand, losing a particular species of

plants

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and living creatures is the main issue in today's world, because there are some reasons behind it. First of all, they are an important part of our ecosystem, if eco-

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disturbs

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the community have to face more major issues in the climate

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as shortage of water and food.

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, nowadays, tigers are considered endangered species, which play a main role in the ecosystem because they eat vegetarian

animals

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like goats. if they are lost

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the number of vegetarian

animals

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will rise and individuals have to face disputes related to a shortage of food because they will finish all

plants

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on the earth.

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, some

plants

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are helpful

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rain to the earth and are

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used in medication to save the public. if they decline

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the population of some bees

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despair because they need some special

plants

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for feeding.

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, it is thought that

pollution

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(water, air and land), global warming and traffic are more essential topics in today's society.

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,

Pollution

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is responsible

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physical and mental problems

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as heart attacks and depression.

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, the government has to spend a

lot

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large

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amount of money on the treatment of patients.

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, global warming is the main cause of changes in the weather.

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, summer and winter are getting

more hot

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and

cold

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coldter

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but not least, traffic is one of the main causes of infection and health diseases, because the number of cars and motorbikes rising day by day and people are giving less preference to public transportation and bikes.

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,

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society suggests that

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the government

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should take

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actions to remove these problems in the environment.

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, even though, some communities think that the declining

pollution

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of particular

vegetations

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and

animals

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is the main issue in the environment.

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, others believe that transportation,

pollution

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and global warming are more debatable issues in today's society. But

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my point of view, every problem has endangered the environment. So, the local public and the government should work together to solve environmental problems.