You normally go shopping in the area where you live. However, you think some of the facilities for shoppers could be improved. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter: say in general what you like about shopping in your area say what is wrong with the facilities suggest how they can be improved

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Dear Sir, I hope
this
letter finds you well. My name is Jun, and I am writing
this
letter to let you know that I am one of the regular customers at the local market.
Additionally
, I would like to express my attitude towards the facilities. Allow me to elaborate on the situation.
Firstly
, I enjoy shopping at the local market because it offers cheaper prices compared to other places, and it sells various items that I cannot find
elsewhere
. Unfortunately, there is a drawback with the facilities. As for the
payment
, it is not convenient
due to
the limited
payment
methods accepted.
Moreover
, I have to carry a lot of cash in my wallet because the shopping area does not support e-money or card payments. I kindly request the implementation of QR
payment
.
Furthermore
, in
this
day and age, many young people do not carry cash in their wallets, and having a QR
payment
option would make it easier and more convenient for customers. I hope you will consider my request, and I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Jun
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