The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the
number
of graduate
and Fix the agreement mistake
graduates
postgraduate
who did not Fix the agreement mistake
postgraduates
work
full time
in the UK in the year 2008.
Add a hyphen
full-time
Overall
, it is clear that
both the graduate and postgraduate school had a maximum number
of students
attending further
study, and the last
number
of students
engage in voluntary work
.
A deep analysis of the bar chart provided reveals that in chart 1 in 2008 there were 29,655 students
who graduate and plan to continue study. And while
the number
of part time
Add a hyphen
part-time
work
is 17,735 students
and the number
of less
unemployed is 16,236. Correct quantifier usage
apply
Finally
the least score is voluntary Add a comma
,Finally
work
is only about 3,500
It can be seen from the
graph 2 that there are many Correct article usage
apply
students
who have entered high education. However
, part-time works
are few, 2535 people. Replace the word
workers
In addition
, the number
of unemployed is 1625 people, the
Correct word choice
and the
number
of Correct your spelling
volunteers
volunters
is much lower than in bar chart 1, Correct your spelling
volunteers
only
345 peopleChange preposition
with only
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