The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts illustrate the

number

of

graduate

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graduates

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and

postgraduate

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postgraduates

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who did not

work

full time

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full-time

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in the UK in the year 2008.

Overall

,

it is clear that

both the graduate and postgraduate school had a maximum

number

of

students

attending

further

study, and the

last

number

of

students

engage in voluntary

work

. A deep analysis of the bar chart provided reveals that in chart 1 in 2008 there were 29,655

students

who graduate and plan to continue study. And

while

the

number

of

part time

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work

is 17,735

students

and the

number

of

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unemployed is 16,236.

Finally

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the least score is voluntary

work

is only about 3,500 It can be seen from

the

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graph 2 that there are many

students

who have entered high education.

However

, part-time

works

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workers

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are few, 2535 people.

In addition

, the

number

of unemployed is 1625 people,

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number

of

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volunteers

volunters

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volunteers

is much lower than in bar chart 1,

only

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345 people