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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
#information #ages #populations #yemen #projections
The charts
shows
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the
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apply
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information based on the
ages
 of the
populations
 who are from
Yemen
 and Italy in 2000 and predictions for
2050
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the 2050
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 year.
Overall
, it is understandable from the charts that the maximum
on
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apply
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the
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apply
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ages
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age
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 of the
populations
 of
Yemen
 is 0-14 and 15-59 old years.
However
, in
Italy
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,Italy
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 it is only 15-59 and 60+ old years. It is predicted that by the time of
2050
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,2050
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 there will be maximum remained
ages
 for
Yemen
 15-59 and 0-14, but
comparison
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in comparison
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 with Italy there will be only 15-59 and 60+
ages
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age
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populations
. In
2000
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the 2000
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 year minimum
ages
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age
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 population for
Yemen
 was only 60+
populations
. But in
Italy
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,Italy
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 it was only 0-14
ages
. Comparison
the
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of the
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ages
 of
populations
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the populations
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 of
Yemen
 with Italy, it
is reveal
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 that in 2000 year
ages
 of 15-59
was
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were
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 16% more in Italy than
Yemen
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in Yemen
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, and
also
 it was 20% more
of
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in
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 60+
ages
 than
Yemen
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in Yemen
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. Despite that
Yemen
 experienced
less
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fewer
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populations
 of
ages
 about 15-59 and 60+ than Italy, there was only
higher
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a higher
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 result of 0-14
ages
 which
it
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is almost 36% more than the same
result’s
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results
result
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 of Italy.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ages, populations, yemen with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age demographics
  • age structure
  • population distribution
  • youthful population
  • ageing population
  • life expectancy
  • birth rate
  • demographic shift
  • population projection
  • median age
  • dependents
  • working-age population
  • elderly dependents
  • geriatric
  • fertility rate
  • migration
  • demographic trends
  • baby boomers
  • demographic dividend
  • population pyramid
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