The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The charts
shows
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show
the
information based on the Correct article usage
apply
ages
of the populations
who are from Yemen
and Italy in 2000 and predictions for 2050
year.
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the 2050
Overall
, it is understandable from the charts that the maximum on
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apply
the
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apply
ages
of the Fix the agreement mistake
age
populations
of Yemen
is 0-14 and 15-59 old years. However
, in Italy
it is only 15-59 and 60+ old years. It is predicted that by the time of Add a comma
,Italy
2050
there will be maximum remained Add a comma
,2050
ages
for Yemen
15-59 and 0-14, but comparison
with Italy there will be only 15-59 and 60+ Change preposition
in comparison
ages
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age
populations
. In 2000
year minimum Change the article
the 2000
ages
population for Change the noun form
age
Yemen
was only 60+ populations
. But in Italy
it was only 0-14 Add a comma
,Italy
ages
.
Comparison the
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of the
ages
of populations
of Correct article usage
the populations
Yemen
with Italy, it is reveal
that in 2000 year Change the verb form
is revealed
ages
of 15-59 was
16% more in Italy than Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Yemen
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in Yemen
also
it was 20% more of
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in
ages
than Yemen
.
Despite that Change preposition
in Yemen
Yemen
experienced less
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fewer
populations
of ages
about 15-59 and 60+ than Italy, there was only higher
result of 0-14 Correct article usage
a higher
ages
which it
is almost 36% more than the same Correct pronoun usage
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results
result
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