The chart below shows literacy rates in several different countries around the world.
The chart illustrates information about literacy rates in percentages in four different
countries
and in the entire world.
Overall
, in all countries
except country
D male are more educated than females in contrast
with country
D where both genders' literacy rate is equal. According to
the ,
chart Remove the comma
apply
country
D is the most educated one whereas
country
A is the east educated.
Firstly
we can see that the most literate countries
are countries
C and D whose educated total population
are 90,3% and 99% respectively Fix the agreement mistake
populations
in contrast
with country
A and B whose only nearly half the Fix the agreement mistake
countries
population
is educated with an extensive gap between gender`s literacy rate. If we go through the details we can clearly see that in countries
A and B males are more than twofold more literate than females. On the other ,hand while
exploring data about countries
C and D we notice that in these countries
where a great amount of the population
is literate the difference between genders
educational rates is nearly equal with a little bit Change noun form
genders'
gender's
male
advantage.
Change preposition
of male
Finally
, according to
the chart is evident that the above than four fifth
of Add a hyphen
four-fifth
world's
Correct article usage
the world's
population
are
educated with males little advance.Change the verb form
is
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